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Spirit maker chapter 70 the illusion of speed

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Spirit maker chapter 70  The extreme training part 2 the training of speed (Vendor s determination and confidence! Training of illusion of speed)

Note-I was not actualy planing that spirit maker chapter 70 go more that 15 pages long and came actualy 16 by putting  words in order that its easy to read and as well i decided to be like

this because i was not shure how much pages long will be but then it came to 16 pages long
and also it was 16 pages long becaues of not just putting words in order but as well that chapter ends where vendor and raizen end their training and vendor starts with sheena s  grandpa next training and also this was really a challange to me what to decide will i do it like

that or not but i did decide that it go like this because i actualy planed that it be like this that the chapter ends where vendor ends his training the illusion of speed with his dad raizen while he was serius and then the chapter ends where vendors starts his training with sheena s  grandpa heh so i hope you will like it my freinds enjoy reading

As vendor belive in him self he showed his determnination and confidence for his training! as vendor s dad raizen heared how vendor said he will give his best in the training then his dad raizen said that s the spirit and vendor was so exited for that training he will do! And then vendor asked his dad raizen what will this training be about and then vendor s dad raizen said to vendor that is good that he asked then raizen explaiend to him how in old days raizen catched vendor s hand by going straight at him! As little and then vendor said that he do remember that and also vendor explained how same thing did earth bandits to vendor but

vendor beated them! then vendor said thanks to sheena s grandpa and sheena s grandpa said to vendor that is alright and that he dont have to worry about it and vendor was so full of confidence then afther that raizen said to vendor that he understand him what he said about edgar how he made an illusion while going towards using his speed by hitting vendor out of no where then raizen asked his son vendor is he ready for the training to work on envade the attack and vendor then said how he is ready then raizen explained everything what he will do

then vendor stayed while his dad raizen was going little off then raizen ask his son vendor is he ready that he start and then vendor said that he is ready as vendor was looking right and left he noticed no one whil his dad raizen just made an illusion and then raizen hit vendor into stomach out of no where then afther that vendor was feeling exousted and then raizen  said to his son vendot that they should stop because vendor is exousted then vendor said that he can

contiue then raizen did same thing over and over again while vendor got to mich hit into his stomach then raizen said to vendor that its enough and that they should stop and vendor said that his dad raizen do it just one more time then raizen said ok then but just this once and

vendor was happy to hear that even so he was exited then wen vendor s dad raizen said keep your vendor started to concertrate then raizen made an illuson to hit vendor again into stomach but then vendor got flash back wen raizen  was almoust hitting his son vendor how edgar did same thing and how he call vendor scary cat and also raizen say keep your guard off

then vendor concertrated and said how he isnt scary cat and that this time he will envade his dad raizen s  attack and then just as raizen hited vendor almoust into stomach something unexpected happened vendor out of no where catched his dad raizen s hand vendor got so
happy because of it and then he laught as vendor s dad raizen was so proud of him that he

finally did it then vendor fell on the feild then raizen was woorrying that something bad happened to vendor but vendor was just to exousted laying on the feild laughting then as vendor laughted raizen said to his son vendor that there is still alot to do in this training to training his speed! What will vendor s  new training be like? Only time can tell

When vendor was laughting on the feild how he catched his dad raizen s hand and he got so happy how he finally did it just like before in old days wen vendor was a kid then vendor got asleep because he is exousted then vendor s dad raizen bringed him in the house to put him in bed to sleep and then

While vendor sleep vendor s parents say something
Raizen while looking at vendor he then say-Vendor my son there  is still alot to do so get plenty of sleep because we will make you stronger in this training so get in shape so you can train again tummorow

Vendor is sleeping and then raizen and mirjana are out while talking with sheena s grandpa and spirit master

Then sheena s grandpa say
Sheena s grandpa-I guues it s time to go home so i can come back in the morning for vendor s training of speed!
Then raizen woneders if sheena s grandpa wana stay to sleep in his house
Raizen-I see but if you want you can sleep in our house my old freind!
Sheena s grandpa-Well i dont know....because i am not shure if you have enough room for me
Mirjana-Oh that s no problem we do have a room where you can sleep!
Sheena s grandpa-Oh is see maybe then i stay haha!
Raizen-See..its not a problem feel like you re at home heh!
Sheena s grandpa-Thanks....
Raizen-No problem
Mirjana smile and then raizen ask something spirit master

Raizen look at spirit master and then he ask him something
Raizen-Hey master you can as well sleep here if you want.....
Spirit master-Dont worry i am ok i can sleep here the feel of nature!
Raizen-Oh ok i see
Akward silence

Then while raizen go in the house he look at his master and say nothing
Then his wife mirjana also go in the house and sheena s grandpa to then raizen also get back in the house and then

While mirjana is doing the dishesh and talk with sheena s grandpa raizen say he is going to say something to vendor and his wife mirjana say ok and that he dont be to loud and also sheena s grandpa laughted.... and raizen said ok and go to his son vendor s room and then

Raizen enters in his son vendor s room while vendor is sleeping and then while raizen is looking at his son vendor he then say something

Raizen-Vendor my son there  is still alot to do in the training of speed so get plenty of sleep!
Then while raizen said that while he look at his son vendor he closes the door and go back where mirjana is doing dishesh and sheena s grandpa is sitting and talking with mirjana

While mirjana is doing the dishesh he look at razing while he is coming and then she ask something her hausband raizen

Mirjana while looking at raizen she ask him something
Mirjana-Hey hausband is he sleeping well?
Raizen-Yes like a baby...
Mirjana-Ha ha ha...that s good to hear hausband
Raizen-Yes it is!

Then sheena s grandpa hears what raizen and mirjana talked then sheena s grandpa ask something while he look at his freind raizen and mirjana

Sheena s grandpa-You are really good parents as always!
Mirjana-Of course we both care for my son and of course my hausband  then she hit raizen and say right?
Raizen have akward feeling and then he say-Oh that yes of course we both do!
Mirjana-Shhh not that loud vendor is sleeping
Raizen-Oh ok i be silent
Sheena s grandpa-Ha ha ha that s good to hear!
Then raizen ask something sheena s grandpa
Raizen-Hey old freind i wana tell you something
Sheena s grandpa-Yes?

Raizen-Well you trained  my son back then that he get stronger and i am thank full for this even so i train him now and you will as well train his speed tummorow right?
Sheena s grandpa-Oh this is at least i could do old freind its alright dont worry
Raizen-ha ha ha ok then!
Mirjana smiles and say thanks then sheena s grandpa say also it s fine that they dont have to worry

Sheena s grandpa-Yeah!since your son vendor meet sheena they been awesome freinds! But even so that bastards edgar took my only grand chaild hope your son will learn him a lesson that s why we will give our best to learn his speed to match edgar s speed
Raizen-Yeah....that s no problem my old freind that s the new generation for you
Mirjana-Dont worry i am shure our son will do his best in his training
Sheena s grandpa-Yeah i do belive....
Raizen-See my freind there s nothing to worry about
Sheena s grandpa-Of course! That s why i will teach him the training of speed attack!
Raizen-That s the spirit old freind!
Mirjana-That s nice to hear!
Sheena s grandpa-Yeah..

Then raizen look towards his wife mirjana and wonders what s for diner and thenhe ask his wife mirjana what s for diner

Raizen-Hey wife what s for diner?
Mirjana-Its eggs....
Raizen-I see...so just eggs?
Mirjana show her akward s face while looking and raizen and then she say
Mirjana-Do you want something else?
Raizen-No...no i am ok with eggs!
Sheena s grandpa-Ha ha ha ha....
Raizen-What so funy?
Sheena s grandpa-Nothing...
Raizen-Oh ok

While mirjana put eggs on the table raizen ask sheena s grandpa something
Raizen-Hey old freind do you want to eat with us?
Sheena s grandpa-Well i am not really houngry...
And then mirjana say
Mirjana-It s fine but if you change your mind just say...
Sheena s  grandpa-Shure...
Raizen-Psst she make great eggs you shure whould like my wife s cooking its great
Sheena s grandpa-Oh well maybe i change my mind and eat haha!
Mirjana smile and then she puts eggs and say
Mirjana-Here....
Sheena s grandpa-Thanks

Then they eat and then

Sheena s  grandpa get s impressed by mirjana s cooking and then he say
Sheena s grandpa-Wow this is really great! Indeed
Raizen-Ha ha... told you my freind
Mirjana smile
Sheena s grandpa then say something
Sheena s grandpa-I guues its time to go to bed because tummorow starts vendor s training of speed attacking!
Raizen and mirjana-Its fine dont worry!
Sheena s grandpa-Yes i know! Good night my freind
Raizen-Good night...
Mirjana-Have nice sleep!
Sheena s grandpa-Yeah good night to you two as well
Raizen and mirjana-Thanks

And then raizen go to sleep in his room witch raizen and mirjana decided to give him! That he dont have to come here from his place always and that s really nice from raizen and mirjana for giving him a room to sleep so that he dont have to come from his place to vendor s place raizen and mirjana

And then Mirjana says-He left so i guues we are alone now hausband
Raizen-Its  fine my wife heh!
Mirjana-Yeah! But i am just so worried about vendor s training and stuff will he stand this training witch you and sheena s grandpa and spirit maker will learn him...
Raizen-Dont worry wife vendor is strong that how he was before and i belive in him!
While mirjana hears what raizen says raizen still say
Raizen-As you belive in him right?
Mirjana-Of course i belive in him hausband as we both! Do
Then while raizen look at his wife mirjana
Mirjana still say by showing her s akward face
Mirjana-So be little less though on vendor next time ok?
Raizen-Yes i understand!
Raizen say in his thougs-She s scary....
Mirjana smiles and say-Heh

Raizen-Yeah so that s the new generation for you
Mirjana-I see..
Raizen-So should we go sleep wife? I guues we need sleep as well and vendor to that he train tummorow the training of speed and envade with me...
Mirjana-Yes you are right! But do you remember i told you to be less though?
Raizen-Yes i do!
Mirjana-Alright then i belive you! and yes we are both going to sleep now
Raizen-Alright....
Mirjana-Right!
Then raizen and mirjana go sleep so that raizen can train vendor in the morning! And then

Next morning

The day is clear and sun shines bright and it sparkles over the window and then while vendor is sleeping he get s up and then vendor say something and wonders where he is

Vendor put his hand on his head and blink because of suns  sparkle and then
Vendor-Ugh...where em i?
Vendor look over the house and then
Vendor-Oh...haha i am home

Vendor then says in his thougs that if is this a dream what  he was goung trough and how he learned to envade his dad raizen speed
Vendor ask him self-Is this a dream where i been training with my dad on my speed to envade his speed wen i catched his hand
Then vendor wonders
Vendor-I guues it isnt dream...

Then vendor thinks like he something forgot
Vendor-Hmm..wait a moment yikes its morning! I have to go train! With my dad and train my speed to envade my dad s attack! Damn
Then vendor runs to the kitchen where he notice everyone and then vendor s mother mirjana notice vendor how he runs then she say

Mirjana-Where are you going?
Vendor-To training mom! To train on my speed with my dad
Mirjana-And what about your break fast?
Vendor stops running and then he says
Vendor-Oh ok then...sight

Then vendor s dad notice vendor while sheena s grandpa is also up and then
Raizen-Oh you re up vendor....
Vendor-Yeah...but i though youre outside waiting to start the training
Raizen-Its fine son but listen to your mom ok? First goes break fast so you can be in shape to training your speed with me to envade my attack...
Vendor-Aha ok then i understand dad i stay here and eat break fast!
Raizen-Good
Mirjana-Great now eat your break fast my son so you can get stronger
Everyone laught
Vendor-Oh ok....
Raizen-Ha ha ha!
Sheena s grandpa....
Vendor-What so funy?
Raizen-Nothing just eat
Vendor-Alright! Then vendor eats break fast and then he ask something

Vendor-Hey dad i cant wait to start the training with you to envade your speed again with my own hands! Vendor shows his hands with his confidence
Raizen-Ha ha ha its fine i belive in you my son! dont worry right over wen you finish eat you can come out side that we start out training alright?
Vendor-Yeah i know! I cant wait!
Then sheena s grandpa comes in and say-Good morning
Everyone notice him and say back good morning
Sheena  s grandpa notice vendor that he s awake and then he say-Oh i see you re also awake boy!

Vendor-Yes i cant wait that i start train with my dad the training of speed!
Sheena s grandpa-Ha ha that s nice to hear!
Raizen-Ha ha...i guues i am going out so wen you finish your break fast come out side so we can start training your speed to envade my attack ok? Because you have next training afther this!
Vendor-I understand as soon as possible i finish eat i come and training my speed to envade your attacks

Raizen-Alright then raizen go out then vendor wonders
Vendor-I wonder what dad meant by next training hmm...
Then mirjana asks something sheena s grandpa if he wana break fast with her and vendor
Mirjana-Hey freind do you want to eat break fast with me and vendor as well?
Sheena s grandpa-Oh ok...shure i can
Mirjana-Nice i will put one plate for you to then!
While mirjana get a plate to get for sheena s grandpa vendor then ask sheena  sgrandpa something

Vendor-Hey old man i cant wait to train with my dad the training of speed to envade his attacks
Sheena s grandpa-You shure are exited arent you boy?
Vendor-Of coure more that ever! I just cant wait
While mirjana and sheena s grandpa  heared what vendor said then mirjana started to laught
Mirjana-Ha ha ha ha!
Sheena s grnadpa-Ha ha ha ha! thats the spirit boy
Vendor-Yeah!
Then wen vendor finish his talk with sheena s grandpa he just canted wait to go outside to train with his dad to traing his speed to envade his dad raizen s attacks

Venedor finished eating his breakfast and then
Vendor look at his mom and say
Vendor-Hey mom i finish off my break fast! So um can i go outside so i can train with my dad now? Its realyl inportand because i have to train so i can save sheena!
Mirjana-Yes i understand you my son! just dont over do it ok?
Vendor-I understand!

Then sheena s grandpa laugh and say-Ha ha ha...thats  the determination and confidence kid! I guues i am ok out now to!
Vendor-Yeah and you to?
Sheena s grandpa-Yeah i am going on fresh air and to watch as well your progress in the training how you will training your speed to envade your dad raizen s  speed!
Vendor-Alright! And i give my best in this training!
Mirjana smile and then
Sheena s grandpa then say-Ha ha ha that s great i guues i am going outside now
Then sheena s grandpa go out

And notice raizen out side then
Raizen-Hey where is vendor?
Sheena s grandpa-Hes right over her he is just finishing his breakfast off
Raizen-All right then i guues i wait him a little longer unitil he comes so we can train his speed to envade my attack and then we can progress with next training!
Sheena s grandpa-That s right i know...
Raizen-Yeah

Where vendor and his mom are
Vendor-Alright i finish my breakfast now i am going to train now with my dad....
Mom-Good luck my son!
Vendor-Thanks

Then vendor comes outside and notice his dad raizen and sheena s grandpa
Then raizen notice his son vendor and sheena s grandpa to and then raizen look at his son vendor and say

Raizen-I see you finally came to train your speed to envad my attacks?
Vendor-Yes i did came to training my speed to envade your attaks and that s why i will give my very best and keep my guard!
Raizen-That is what i wana hear! Great
Vendor-Yes! so um can we starts now?
Raizen-Of course so are you ready?
Vendor-Yes i am!

Raizen-Alright so you know alredy what to do?
Vendor-Yes
Raizen-Ok but let me tell you something before we start again
Vendor watch his dad raizen and then he say
Vendor-Alright
Then while raizen watch at his son vendor to say something to him
Raizen-Ok then first this was just a test that i was hitting you just at stomach this training will be little more though but i wont do it though like last time ok?

Vendor-Oh ok then i understand
Raizen-Yeah...even so wen you catched my hand this was just because i was little keeping it off because you was exousted but this time we will be for real but it wont be though
Vendor-Aha i get it now! And why did you do that?
Raizen-Because i am your father so i must be little less though since your mother told me....
Vendor-Alright then
Raizen-But before that i say i must explain to you that you have to focus on my illusion wen i am going at you to hit you and you will envade my attack ok? Because this was just a test you did first time! Now real training starts
Vendor-Oh ok then i am ready no matter what and i wont let my guard off this time
Raizen-Great now we are starting the training
Vendor-Right


Vendor stays on the feild while his dad raizen go little off him and then
Vendor in his thougs-Alright this time i will need more to concertrate on my dad s illusion that i dont get in stomach just like before even so wen i cough my dad s hand it was just because i was exousted....sigh but i will try my best so that i can keep my guard tigh this time!

Raizen-You ready?
Vendor-Yes i am!
Raizen-Alright! Here i go
Then raizen again make illusion and go right at vendor

Vendor notice that raizen made an illusion and then he says
Vendor-Concer-trate!
Vendor looks left and right! And then
Raizen is going right on vendor while vendor thinks
Vendor wonders where his dad raizen is
Vendor-Where is he!

Raizen-Here i am! Raizen appears right behaind vendor and then he got hit while vendor notice him
Vendor-Argh...ouch jumpes from right to left put his hand on the feild
Vendor while watch at raizen-Damit...
Raizen-Vendor! you need to concertrate!
Vendor-Yes i know!

Raizen-Alright lets try it again then
Vendor-Ok dad!

Vendor stays on the feild while raizen make an illusion again and go right at vendor while vendor look left and right and then
Vendor-Now i have to! Concertrate!!!!!!!!!!!

Raizen goes right at vendor and then he appears right on right side of him and say
Raizen while is hitting vendor-Keeep your guard son and concertrate!
Vendor-look on right side then go off
Then vendor s dad raizen do same thing over and over again then vendor afther alot getting hit and jumping by steping he says to his dad raizen
Vendor-Dad....while are you not being serius!
Raizen-Because your mom told me!

Vendor-But i wont learn nothing if you arent serius remember you your self told me i catched your hand because you leave me just because i am your son!
Raizen get s a shocking face
Akward silence
Raizen.....

While mirjana watchesh how vendor traing with his dad raizen then say in his thougs
Raizen-Ugh what will i tell to  my wife if she found out that i am going to be serius on my son vendor....
Mirjana watches raizen and vendor
Vendor-Dont worry dad! I will be ok! Then vendor looks at his mom and say that he want that his dad be serius wen he train with vendor

Vendor-Please mom let my dad be seriust that he can train me that i can envade his speed this time in serius way!
Mirjana....Vendor i said alredy no to your dad...

Vendor-But please just for some time! I really need it so i can  beat edgar and save sheena if my dad isnt serius i wont learn much because he was easy on me wen i catched his hand!
Mirjana-Are you really shure you will be ok?
Vendor-I give my word on it! So please!
Mirjana-Oh ok then but just this once ok?
Vendor-Thanks alot mom!
Mirjana-Yeah....

Raizen-Alright then wen my wife  agreed that i can be serius i will be serius but dont tell me later i did not warn you ok?
Vendor-Yes i understand you dad!
Raizen-Ok then so are you ready now?
Vendor-Yes!

Raizen-All right lets get serius then son! and this time concertrate!
Vendor-Right!

Vendor stays while raizen is going right at vendor and then when raizen made an illusion vendor looks  around and then
Raizen hit vendor from the left side and then
Vendor got hit by his dad raizen by using his fast speed using his illusion and then
Wen vendor flyes and then steps saying
Vendor-Ouch...gah
Raizen-You ok son?
Vendor-All s fine contiue!
Raizen-Ok now concertate! And show me what you can do son!

Vendor-Right!!!!!!!!!!!! Dad
Raizen-Here i come!

Vendor watch his dad raizen how he made illusion using his fast speed by being serius and then
While raizen is going right at vendor then vendor say in his thougs
Vendor-Alright!  Now i must be serius to! And concertrate! Vendor close his eyes

Then raizen go at vendor from behaind while vendor closed his eyes and concertrate
Raizen-Keeep.............
Vendor.....Concertrate
Raizen almoust while he is hitting vendor-Your!
Vendor-Almoust there!
Raizen guard off! Then while raizen hit his son vendor behaind his back
Raizen-Haaaaa!! then raizen hit vendor but then something unexpected happens

Vendor-Now! Is the time! Almoust while raizen yells keep your guard then vendor turns silently and then
Raizen missed him then vendor use his own punch
Vendor-Got you! haha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Punch his dad this time
Raizen-.....
Everyone.....
The dust woshesh

Raizen grins and smile....while vendor punched him this time!
Vendor smile to and say-I got you dad! Ha
Raizen-Ha ha! whu could thoug you will do it! Since i was holding back then when you catched my hand! But dont think this is over because we still have a long way to train this speed training to envade my attack got it?

Everyone look at vendor and raizen while raizen speaks

Vendor-Right! Just as you said dad!
Raizen-Ha ha ha ha! but as i told you we are still training do let your guard off son
Vendor-Yes! dad i wont let my guard off and will concertate

Raizen-Good lets then try again!
Vendor-Yes!

Raizen goes right at vendor and then vendor look how his dad by being serius made an illusion with his speed

Then vendor close his eyes again and concertate
Then vendor say
Vendor-Concertate!
While vendor is concertrating raizen almoust hit s vendor from the sky using his fast punch by making and illusion with his speed
Vendor still concertrates
And then raizen while he is almoust going to hit vendor vendor says
Vendor-Here you are! And then
Vendor try to block his dad raizen s hand and then he notice it was an illusion
Raizen from other side from left try to hit vendor while vendor is not noticing him because he used concertrating on his dad raizen while he s being serius by attaking his son vendor from sky and then
Vendor-What? where...
Then raizen hits vendor right from the right side
Vendor then vendor get s hit by right side and flyes and then
Vendor-Damn i did not expect this! Its just like how edgar did same thing
Raizen-My son! you need to imagine that illusion afther second in concertrating your power into not just one spot!
Vendor-Alright! In one spot concertration!

Raizen-You ready?
Vendor-Yes!

Raizen-Here i come again!

While vendor concertrates raizen hit vendor from right side and then
Vendor concertrates while raizen is almoust hitting vendor on right side vendor then block his dad s hand on right side and then

Vendor-That s an illusion i must concertrate in the one spot
Raizen-Here i am! Then raizen hit his son vendor from the  middle side while vendor is looking right

Vendor-One...spot...one spot concertate ugh!
Raizen then hits vendor from the middle side and vendor flyes and then
Vendor-Damit! I was so near! But still i am confused i was envading your attack then back then but then you did not make illusion but i guues this time you are making double illusion just like edgar!

Raizen-Yes! you need to learn this because it s inportand so dont concertrate just in one spot but from my illusion to my real speed ok?
Vendor-Yes! i will try dad!
Raizen-Good be ready here i come again!

Vendor say in his thougs while raizen s dad said good be ready here i am come!
Vendor-This time i have to concertrate not just in one spot but from  my dad s illusion of speed!
Then while raizen goes right at vendor from the middle side yelling keep your guard
Vendor close his eyes and concertrate in just one spot but he cant do it
Then they do same over and over again and then
Vendor-Damit! What em i doing wrong!

Raizen-Dont worry my son just concertrate in more spots from my illusion speed ok?
Vendor-Alright i will give my best this time
Raizen-Great! You ready?
Vendor-Yes!

Then while vendor waiting on the feild that his dad raizen strikes at him by being serius and making his illusion speed and then

Vendor say in his thougs this time i will do it right this time and will concertrate in not just one spot but more to! To envade my dad s illusion speed while he is being serius!

Vendor-To not do same mistake as i been doing how edgar was hitting me again and again! Back then

Flash back-Vendor gets hit again and again by edgar s fast speed and then
Vendor-Argh....damit
Edgar-You are just a prey....you cant match my speed at all so just give up!
Vendor-I will never give up even if i cant match your speed i will find a way to beat you somehow!
Edgar-Dont make me laught!

Then edgar pases vendor saying
Edgar-Isnt this to fast for you?
Vendor-Ugh
Then edgar go straight at vendor by making an illusion of speed
Vemdor-where are you?
Edgar comes behaind vendor s back and say
Edgar-Here em i and hit him while vendor is not noticing but almoust wen vendor turns edgar hited him but then vendor tryes to hit edgar but it was an illusion

Vendor-What? an illusion?
Edgar-Just as i said you cant match my speed while i make my illusion of speed gahahahah!
Vendor-This is impressive but i find a way to deal with your illusion of speed!
Edgar-Then try me!
Vendor-Shure i show you what i can do!
Edgar-Gahahahahahah i will make you eat this words you said! Here i come! Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vendor concertrates and then

Vendor smile  in his thougs while he s concertrating in his mind
Edgar-Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! You are goood......
Vendor....

Raizen-Keep your.....

While raizen almoust hit vendor then vendor
Turns by senseing his dad s presence

Edgar-Dead!
Raizen-Off!

Vendor notice his dad raizen how he is almoust punching him from behaind and then vendor turns behaind where his dad is attacking and then
Edgar-You are dead!
Raizen-Keep your guard off!
Vendor-tch! i will make it somehow to break trough this illusion! then Vendor notice his dad raizen s presence and then he envade his dad s attack and then
Then vendor say while hitting his dad raizen
Vendor-Its not over yet that s just an illusion its not over yet!
Raizen yells concertrate!
Then while vendor hited his dad raizen  
Raizen made an illusion and then go at vendor by being serius from the  right side and then
Vendor concertrates by closing eyes into not just one spot
Raizen-That s good you noticed it my son  but find the timing because i am gong strike just from!
Vendor-Almoust!
Raizen hits vendor s almoust from right side and then

Vendor get s flash back again
Edgar-You are just a prey you cant keep with my speed

Raizen-Haaa!
Vendor.....No! i will

Then when vendor s dad almoust hit vendor  then vendor say in his thougs while concertrating not just in one spot
Vendor-Make it somehow to break trough your illusion!
Raizen hits
Vendor-Right now and here!  From the
Vendor turns on right side while senseing his dad s presence
While raizen is hitting
Vendor-I found you!  here you are just from the right side
Raizen-!
Flash back
Edgar-!
Vendor-Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vendor punchesh his dad in stomach this time  shhhhhh bam!!!!
Raizen-.....

Edgar-Ugh! tssshhh crash hit!
Raizen-Argh!
Vendor smile by punching his dad while he made illusion of speed by being serius
Raizen-Ha ha ha! you cough me of guard!
Vendor-Ha! yes i did dad...i got you just from the right side while you made illusion of speed by being serius!

Raizen-mhm great job my son! and tell me how did you find that i was from the right side?
Vendor-Thanks dad and its was just like you told me that i concertrate at just one point but in
other point of illusion of speed you made! And that s how i senseed your presentce while i
envaded your attack and attaked you but just as you hited me  i was noticing that it isnt over

and got an flash back of me and edgar fighting he said to me that i am just a prey and that i give up but i belived in my self and made it somehow to envade his illusion of speed as yours to dad and i sensed you while i concertrated not just in one spot but other spots to!  And found

Just as you almout hited me i was concertrating and sensed you and found you from the right  side and then while i sensed you while conertrating not into just one point but more point i finally punched you this time dad! Yes!!!!!!!!

Raizen smile and put his hand at vendor s head
Vendor watch his dad raizen how he put his hand on his head
Raizen-That s nice to hear! I am so glad son that you finally mastered it but dont think its over yet!

Vendor-Yes dad! I  will do my best in this training no matter what and wont give up!
Raizen-That s the spirit! Ha ha ha ha

Mirjana look at his hausband and her s son vendor and cryes
Mirjana in her thougs say
Mirjana-Sniff niff...who could though our son will go so far to learn something great!

While sheena s grandpa look at raizen and vendor while they talk he say in his thougs and laugh
Sheena s grandpa-Ha ha ha....whou could thing this boy will do it! This is what i call great determination and confidence! Great job kid! But dont think your training is over because i am the one whu will teach you next so you can learn to attack somone whu is fast as an edge!

While sheena s grandpa talked about vendor how he will teach him next to learn to how to attack somone whu is fast as edge then spirit master look at raizen and vendor as well and say

Spirit master-This boy is really something just by looking at him how his training progress! Good job kid i hope you will be the one whu will save the world from these evil bandits!

Then mirjana look at her son vendor by waving with her and and then she yells
Mirjana-Son! this was great! You showed him your place!

Raizen look at her wife then get s akward face
Raizen....ha..ha...haaa
Vendor-Thanks mom! And i know
Then vendor wonders and talk to his dad raizen

Vendor-I wonder dad how mom is cheering for me but she did not want that you get serius....
Raizen-Same here my son! but one thing is for shure! You did great job on this training i am very proud of you my son
While raizen looks at vendor he still say
Raizen-Thats  why i am really proud of you my son! you finally catched up to my illsuion speed attacks just as you said by concertrating in the one spot! To hit me while i hited you
almoust from the right side you noticed me! You re getting much better that just before how
you was back then! But dont think this is over because
Vendor still looks what his dad raizen say and the others
Then show at mirjana sheena s grandpa and spirit master

Mirjana

Sheena s grandpa

Spirit master

All look what raizen is saying to vendor!

While raizen looks at vendor he say
Raizen-Because the next training awaits!
Vendor-Right dad i wont give up and will give my very best what ever training comes up!
Raizen-That s the spirit! I knew it just from the old days that there you will learn something to match me and show me your determination and confidence!
Then vendor smiles and say
Vendor-Ha ha...thanks dad!
Raizen-No problem my son!

Then vendor look at his mother mirjana and wave her and yells
Vendor-Mom! Thanks to you i finally did it thanks alot for letting my dad being serius just once! This mean alot to me! To show my determination and confidence!
While vendor said these words to his mother mirjana everyone laugh and then mirjana cryes and say
Mirjana-Thats my son i know! Dont worry its all ok i was worrying alot about you but now i am shure you can handle it! That s why i let you....sniff sniff i am very proud of you to my son!
Vendor-Dont Cry! Mom its ok because i will give my very best! In this training what ever comes up!
Mirjana-Sob sob! Whu said i cry?
Raizen-I guues she made that up again...
Vendor-What?
Mirjana-Its nothing to cry about my son you did just great and i am proud of you!
Raizen-Ha ha ha! did you hear what just your mother said son?

Then when vendor heared what his dad raizen said to vendor that his mother menton to vendor that her son vendor did great job on this training how he was going trough his dad raizen s illusion of speed by hitting him

Vendor looks at his dad raizen and then he say
Vendor-Yes i did dad! Thank you both withoud you i whould not be what i am today but even so there s alot for me to do right?
Raizen-That s right! The next training awaits!
Then vendor wonders and ask then he say
Vendor-I wonder what will next training be like!
Raizen smile by looking at vendor and then he shows his right hand finger pointing at sheena s grandpa and then

Vendor-Sheena s grandpa? Thats
Raizen move his head up and down and then

Sheena s grandpa comes where raizen and vendor is and then
While sheena s grandpa is going near where raizen and vendor are
Vendor looks at his dad by showing his right hand pointing towards sheena s grandpa and then
Vendor-Woah! So you will train my in my next training?
While vendor said these words to sheena s grandpa  and while he is walking towards raizen and vendor and then sheena s grandpa smile  while he is looking and raizen and vendor and then he say in his thougs

Sheena s grandpa-Now s the time to show this boy what he is really made off to train his movement s to match with somone whu s fast as an edge!
While sheena s grandpa said that in his thougs while looking at vendor he still say
Sheena s grandpa-Thats right! I will by your next trainer in this training so you better get ready because it wont be so easy this time as your first was so keep your guard on because your next training is coming up!

Vendor-What ever training comes up i wont give up!
While sheena s grandpa is watching what vendor say and vendor s dad raizen and vendor s mom mirjana and spirit master vendor still say
Vendor-Because i belive in my self that i can do it
While sheena s grandpa is still hearing what vendor is saying and his dad raizen and his mom mirjana and spirit master vendor say

Vendor-So...that i give my very best!

Sheena s grandpa still hear s what vendor say and his dad raizen and his mom mirjana and spirit master then vendor say

Vendor-That s why in wont dissapoint you!
Then sheena s grandpa smile and his dad raizen and his mom mirjana and spirit master by looking at vendor

Vendor-To show you what i can really do in this new training witch is coming up so here i come the next trainig awaits!

What an great determination and confidence! How vendor finally matched his dad raizen s speed by catching his hand once again but later concertrating and seeing trough his illusion!
Vendor is fully of condifence to do his best in his training! and then wen vendor s dad raizen showed his right finger pointing at sheena s grandpa and then sheena s grandpa came and say that he will train him and that he better get ready because this training wont be so easy how his dad raizen was then vendor says how he will give his best in this training and wont disspaoint  to show show what vendor can really to in this new training witch is coming up because the next training awaits! What could this new training be witch sheena s grandpa mention? Only time can tell
This is very special chapter witch i done and its 16 pages long because i was not shure when i writed almoust 11 pages first and then i thinked it will be more if i do how i planned so i decided to write it like that because it will make it more interesting that just less that 11 pages again like 3 or 4 pages long so yeah i worked on this chapter like 1 and half day or 2 i am not really shure if i remember but still i hope you will like this chapter my freinds XD

Note-I was not actualy planing that spirit maker chapter 70 go more that 15 pages long and came actualy 16 by putting words in order that its easy to read and as well i decided to be like

this because i was not shure how much pages long will be but then it came to 16 pages long
and also it was 16 pages long becaues of not just putting words in order but as well that chapter ends where vendor and raizen end their training and vendor starts with sheena s grandpa next training and also this was really a challange to me what to decide will i do it like

that or not but i did decide that it go like this because i actualy planed that it be like this that the chapter ends where vendor ends his training the illusion of speed with his dad raizen while he was serius and then the chapter ends where vendors starts his training with sheena s grandpa heh so i hope you will like it my freinds enjoy reading

As vendor belive in him self he showed his determnination and confidence for his training! as vendor s dad raizen heared how vendor said he will give his best in the training then his dad raizen said that s the spirit and vendor was so exited for that training he will do! And then vendor asked his dad raizen what will this training be about and then vendor s dad raizen said to vendor that is good that he asked then raizen explaiend to him how in old days raizen catched vendor s hand by going straight at him! As little and then vendor said that he do remember that and also vendor explained how same thing did earth bandits to vendor but

vendor beated them! then vendor said thanks to sheena s grandpa and sheena s grandpa said to vendor that is alright and that he dont have to worry about it and vendor was so full of confidence then afther that raizen said to vendor that he understand him what he said about edgar how he made an illusion while going towards using his speed by hitting vendor out of no where then raizen asked his son vendor is he ready for the training to work on envade the attack and vendor then said how he is ready then raizen explained everything what he will do

then vendor stayed while his dad raizen was going little off then raizen ask his son vendor is he ready that he start and then vendor said that he is ready as vendor was looking right and left he noticed no one whil his dad raizen just made an illusion and then raizen hit vendor into stomach out of no where then afther that vendor was feeling exousted and then raizen said to his son vendot that they should stop because vendor is exousted then vendor said that he can

contiue then raizen did same thing over and over again while vendor got to mich hit into his stomach then raizen said to vendor that its enough and that they should stop and vendor said that his dad raizen do it just one more time then raizen said ok then but just this once and

vendor was happy to hear that even so he was exited then wen vendor s dad raizen said keep your vendor started to concertrate then raizen made an illuson to hit vendor again into stomach but then vendor got flash back wen raizen was almoust hitting his son vendor how edgar did same thing and how he call vendor scary cat and also raizen say keep your guard off

then vendor concertrated and said how he isnt scary cat and that this time he will envade his dad raizen s attack and then just as raizen hited vendor almoust into stomach something unexpected happened vendor out of no where catched his dad raizen s hand vendor got so
happy because of it and then he laught as vendor s dad raizen was so proud of him that he

finally did it then vendor fell on the feild then raizen was woorrying that something bad happened to vendor but vendor was just to exousted laying on the feild laughting then as vendor laughted raizen said to his son vendor that there is still alot to do in this training to training his speed! What will vendor s new training be like? Only time can tell
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spiralmaestro's avatar
This is a good chapter! It was very long! One of the longest I ever read! I enjoyed the breakfast and relaxation scenes of the chpater and it's so cool that vendor mastered in using speed!